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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2020 12:23 am 
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Bloodline Name: Bakuton
Clan Name: Fujimura
Leader: Ao Fujimura (NPC)
Village: Iwagakure

Clan Description: The Fujimura clan has long been a staple of the Iwagakure Explosion Corps where their kekkei genkai has proven to be invaluable. They are adept at controlling the explosive power behind their bloodline and their loyalty to Iwagakure is only matched by their prowess in combat.

Clan Characteristics: Each member of the clan varies.

Clan Personality: Each member of the clan varies.

Bloodline Description: Bakuton is the combination of both Doton and Raiton to create devastating explosions. Taijutsu is a common medium through which Bakuton is used, adding explosive force to the user's strikes. When combined with Explosive Clay through a specific Kinjutsu members of this clan are able to create a near limitless number of constructs, each able to explode for massive damage.

Bloodline Limits: Bakuton requires a medium of sorts in order to be used. Whether it is infusing a fist, an arrow, or clay, something must be used to carry the explosive force. Bakuton carries an elemental weakness with Raiton, with certain techniques being nullified entirely when pierced by the element.

Clan Traits:

[Elemental Affinity - Bakuton]
Type: Chakra Trait, Clan Trait - C
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
Go in with a bang!
Grants the use of Bakuton, allowing the user to utilize Fujimura Clan techniques and Traits. If you have taken an element that is not Doton or Raiton, you must take both Doton and Raiton before you take this trait. If you take this trait, you must get both Doton and Raiton before taking another basic element.

[Demolitions Expert]
Type: Ninjutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
They didn't name a Corps after us for nothing.
Honed by generations of experience you have become an expert at destroying what would otherwise stand in your way. Your Bakuton techniques deal triple Damage to ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu-based barriers or walls. Does not stack with [Barrier Buster].

[Heavy Handed]
Type: Taijutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member, Heroic Strength, Masterful Taijutsu
Punch first, ask questions while punching.
You have focused your use of Bakuton in Taijutsu, unleashing reckless blows. Increase the Damage of your melee attacks by 10 but decrease your Durability by teh same amount.

Clan Techniques:

Name: Bakuton: Exploding Palm
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Shurikenjutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: C
Element: Bakuton
Description: After exerting a small amount of Bakuton in their palm a small explosion is created. If used with the proper timing and angle the user can deflect thrown projectiles back at the enemy (Accuracy depends on the user's Shurikenjutsu Skill).
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, 15 Damage (3)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2)
Drawbacks: N/A
Cost: 5

Name: Bakuton: Landmine Fist
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Landmine Fist, Bakuton: Jiraiken, Explosion Style: Landmine Fist
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: B
Element: Bakuton
Description: After making contact with an opponent through something as simple as a punch, the user creates an explosion inside of the target through the use of Bakuton. The user manipulates the directionality of the blast, reducing any potential repercussions such as recoil or being hit with debris from the blast. Similarly to Chakra Enhanced Strength, the cost of the technique is only paid if the blow lands.
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, +40 Damage (16)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2), Masterful 1m Knockback (3)
Drawbacks:
Cost: 21

Number of Members Allowed:
Initial Members: Mika Fujimura

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Strength: Epic
Constitution: Average
Stamina: Average
Reflex: Masterful
Awareness: Average
Combat Skill: Masterful Taijutsu
Ranged Skill: Average Ninjutsu
Finesse Skill: Average Hand Seals

D-Rank: [Arm Day] | [Shinobi Fitness Training] | [Wealthy] | [Anatomical Knowledge] | [Cat’s Grace] | [Sidestep]
C-Rank: [Crushing Blows] | [Reckless Blows] | [Elemental Infusion - Bakuton] | [Elemental Affinity - Bakuton] | [Extensive Fitness Training] | [Aerobatics] | [Pivot] | [Adaptive Weapons (Gauntlets)]
B-Rank: [Compression] | [Heavy Handed]
A-Rank: [Shockwave]
S-Rank:


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2020 3:40 pm 
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Clan Traits:

[Elemental Affinity - Bakuton]
Type: Chakra Trait, Clan Trait - C
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
Go in with a bang!
Grants the use of Bakuton, allowing the user to utilize Fujimura Clan techniques and Traits. If you have taken an element that is not Doton or Raiton, you must take both Doton and Raiton before you take this trait. If you take this trait, you must get both Doton and Raiton before taking another basic element.
Seems fine

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[Demolitions Expert]
Type: Ninjutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
They didn't name a Corps after us for nothing.
Honed by generations of experience you have become an expert at destroying what would otherwise stand in your way. Your Bakuton techniques deal triple Damage to ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu-based barriers or walls.
I don't think a multiplicative effect works here. Damage is currently far too easy to get, you would always get huge value over barriers that are often costly and, in many cases, require a specific A-rank Trait to even use (in the case of Fuuinjutsu). I'd consider a rework, maybe just adding a flat amount of damage, which brings me to
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[Heavy Handed]
Type: Taijutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member, Heroic Strength, Masterful Taijutsu
Punch first, ask questions while punching.
You have focused your use of Bakuton in Taijutsu. Increase the Damage of your melee attacks by 10 but decrease the Damage of your ranged attacks by the same amount.
I think that lowering ranged damage for your melee focus isn't balanced. I'd lower Durability maybe.
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Clan Techniques:

Name: Bakuton: Exploding Palm
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: C
Element: Bakuton
Description: After exerting a small amount of Bakuton in their palm a small explosion is created. If used with the proper timing and angle the user can deflect thrown projectiles back at the enemy.
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, 15 Damage (3)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2)
Drawbacks: N/A
Cost: 5
I think that deflection is good, but reflection should use a ranged skill to decide whether or not it's on target, not just automatically (it is being deflected with an actual explosion, after all, seems a little difficult to aim). I'd use Shurikenjutsu for that - and if it was already meant to, I'd just go ahead and add it into the description.
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Name: Bakuton: Landmine Fist
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Landmine Fist, Bakuton: Jiraiken, Explosion Style: Landmine Fist
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: B
Element: Bakuton
Description: After making contact with an opponent through something as simple as a punch, the user creates an explosion inside of the target through the use of Bakuton. The user manipulates the directionality of the blast, reducing any potential repercussions such as recoil or being hit with debris from the blast. Similarly to Chakra Enhanced Strength, the cost of the technique is only paid if the blow lands.
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, +40 Damage (16)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2), Masterful 1m Knockback (3)
Drawbacks:
Cost: 21
Wow they really outdid themselves with the description on this one, hahah. I can approve it.


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2020 4:32 pm 
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Bloodline Name: Bakuton
Clan Name: Fujimura
Leader: Ao Fujimura (NPC)
Village: Iwagakure

Clan Description: The Fujimura clan has long been a staple of the Iwagakure Explosion Corps where their kekkei genkai has proven to be invaluable. They are adept at controlling the explosive power behind their bloodline and their loyalty to Iwagakure is only matched by their prowess in combat.

Clan Characteristics: Each member of the clan varies.

Clan Personality: Each member of the clan varies.

Bloodline Description: Bakuton is the combination of both Doton and Raiton to create devastating explosions. Taijutsu is a common medium through which Bakuton is used, adding explosive force to the user's strikes. When combined with Explosive Clay through a specific Kinjutsu members of this clan are able to create a near limitless number of constructs, each able to explode for massive damage.

Bloodline Limits: Bakuton requires a medium of sorts in order to be used. Whether it is infusing a fist, an arrow, or clay, something must be used to carry the explosive force. Bakuton carries an elemental weakness with Raiton, with certain techniques being nullified entirely when pierced by the element.

Clan Traits:

[Elemental Affinity - Bakuton]
Type: Chakra Trait, Clan Trait - C
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
Go in with a bang!
Grants the use of Bakuton, allowing the user to utilize Fujimura Clan techniques and Traits. If you have taken an element that is not Doton or Raiton, you must take both Doton and Raiton before you take this trait. If you take this trait, you must get both Doton and Raiton before taking another basic element.

[Demolitions Expert]
Type: Ninjutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member
They didn't name a Corps after us for nothing.
Honed by generations of experience you have become an expert at destroying what would otherwise stand in your way. Your Bakuton techniques deal triple Damage to ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu-based barriers or walls. Does not stack with [Barrier Buster].

[Heavy Handed]
Type: Taijutsu Trait, Clan Trait - B
Prerequisites: Fujimura Clan Member, Heroic Strength, Masterful Taijutsu
Punch first, ask questions while punching.
You have focused your use of Bakuton in Taijutsu, unleashing reckless blows. Increase the Damage of your melee attacks by 10 but decrease your Durability by teh same amount.

Clan Techniques:

Name: Bakuton: Exploding Palm
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Exploding Palm
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Shurikenjutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: C
Element: Bakuton
Description: After exerting a small amount of Bakuton in their palm a small explosion is created. If used with the proper timing and angle the user can deflect thrown projectiles back at the enemy (Accuracy depends on the user's Shurikenjutsu Skill).
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, 15 Damage (3)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2)
Drawbacks: N/A
Cost: 5

Name: Bakuton: Landmine Fist
Alternative Name(s): Explosion Release: Landmine Fist, Bakuton: Jiraiken, Explosion Style: Landmine Fist
Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Complexity:
Clash Rank: B
Element: Bakuton
Description: After making contact with an opponent through something as simple as a punch, the user creates an explosion inside of the target through the use of Bakuton. The user manipulates the directionality of the blast, reducing any potential repercussions such as recoil or being hit with debris from the blast. Similarly to Chakra Enhanced Strength, the cost of the technique is only paid if the blow lands.
Range: Self
Hand Seals: N/A
Parameters: Instant, +40 Damage (16)
Benefits: Chakra Flow (2), Masterful 1m Knockback (3)
Drawbacks:
Cost: 21

Number of Members Allowed:
Initial Members: Mika Fujimura
Approved, have fun!



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