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 Post subject: Senju, Hisashi
PostPosted: Mon Apr 15, 2019 1:45 am 
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Name: Hisashi Senju
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 180 lbs
Rank: Tokubetsu Jōnin
Faction of Origin: Shinobi
Village: Konohagakure
Bloodline/Clan: Senju
Restricted Loan Technique: Flying Thunder God

Appearance: Hisashi is a tall man with tan skin and pitch black eyes. He almost always has a cocky, and egotistical expression. He has long black messy hair which ends a little past his shoulders. His usual attire consist of a black short sleeve shirt, black pants, and traditional shinobi sandals. Over top of his black shirt he wears a flak jacket when in combat. He wears two pouches on his back waistline, and a kunai pouch strapped to his right leg. He wears his headband as a traditional forehead protector, that is when he does actually wear it.

History:Hisashi Senju was born the only child of his parents. For the most part he lived a pretty normal shinobi life. His mother was a loving woman who always tried to spoil Hisashi. His father however was a strict parent who always tried to push Hisashi passed his limit as a shinobi. Due to his father’s training Hisashi breezed through the academy and the ninja ranks. Most of Hisashi’s life he believed that the mission was the main goal and that his teams lives were meaningless. That was until his father’s funeral. Hisashi’s father had been killed on an A-Rank escort mission to the Land of Lightning. Later that year Hisashi made it a goal to visit his mother every day and take care of her. Hisashi look on life had changed as well. He became more like his mother and started caring about his family and villagers. While also becoming kinda cocky and confident like his father. About four years later he was promoted to Tokubetsu Jonin at the age of 21. His journey still has a long way to go before he becomes as strong as he wants to be. (Sorry made this at 4 in the morning)
Personality Traits: Hisashi’s usually extremely outgoing, confident,cocky,manipulative.He can be extremely arrogant and speak in a condescending manner with most people. But behind all that ego he is also logical and tactical when he gets serious and also a very caring shinobi. He always tries his best to protect those closest to him, even if he comes off as arrogant or cocky.
Face Claim: Jumin Han - Mystic Messenger
Theme Song: "God Mode" by Sons of Amon
Chakra Color: Dark Blue
Nindo: I view everyone in the village as my family, and I don’t turn my back on family
Character Preferences:
  • Likes: Spicy food, Training (Mentally and Physical), Relaxing walks, Shogi, Soda
  • Dislikes: Slackers, People who are Disrespectful to their fellow villagers
  • Goals: To become as strong as he possibly can in life.
  • Gender/Sexual Preference: Straight Male
- Fūinjutsu Specialist
- Ninjutsu Expert [Chosen Element: Wood]
- Bukijutsu JoaT Adept
- Sensory Adept

  • Strength: Proficient
  • Constitution: Proficient
  • Stamina: Masterful
  • Reflex: Proficient
  • Coordination: Proficient w/ Major Advantage
  • Wisdom: Proficient
- Mokuton
- Suiton

Spent Character Points:6,900 (3,700 Attributes + 2,000 Skills + 1,000 Elements + 200 Bloodline Tax)
Active Character Points: 6,900
Unspent Character Points: 100
Total Character Points: 7000

Special Abilities:
- One-Handed Handseals - Hisashi can do One-Handed Handseals
- Charismatic Man- Due to his pride, Hisashi cares much about his achievements and wishes to tell people about his positive deeds. He earns 50% more when earning Fame!
- (Plans to add a third SA at a later date)

- One-Handed Handseals - When doing One-Handed Handseals, Hisashi loses a tier in Handseal speed
-But It’s Expensive! - Fame rewards cost twice as much.

Might, Will, And Fate Points
  • Might: 2
  • Will: 1
  • Fate: 2

Last edited by Hisashi Senju on Mon Apr 15, 2019 4:24 am, edited 1 time in total.

 Post subject: Re: Senju, Hisashi
PostPosted: Mon Apr 15, 2019 4:08 am 
Kiri Chunin
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Hey, welcome to the site! Glad to have you joining us.

- One-Handed Handseals - When doing One-Handed Handseals, Hisashi loses a tier in Coordination
-But It’s Expensive! - Fame rewards cost 50% more."

For the first flaw, I assume you intended for it to be impacting Hisashi's ability to form hand seals as fast, correct? In that case, I would ask that you just specify losing a tier to hand seal speed, not specifically Coordination. Because of how hand seal speed is judged through both Reflex and Coordination, a tier drop to Coordination may or may not actually be impactful based on your stat layout.

For the second flaw, I'd like to ask for it to be changed to fame rewards costing twice as much. When someone gains 50% more but rewards costs only 50% more, it balances out those two factors completely. However, it doesn't balance out all of the other benefits that acquiring fame rewards the character with.

Also, I should note that once a character reaches the Chuunin rank, they're able to take one SA without an accompanying flaw, so you could use that to either add on a 3rd SA, or perhaps take away one of those flaws. Or if you're wanting to save that for use at a later date, that's fine as well.

Character Info:
Name: Taiyō Hozuki
Age/Height/Weight: 15, 5'5, 105 lb.
Rank: Genin of Kirigakure

Strength: Average
Constitution: Proficient
Stamina: Masterful
Agility: Proficient
Dexterity: Epic
Wisdom: Masterful

Fighting Styles:
Genjutsu Specialist
Kugutsu Specialist
Fuinjutsu Novice
Kuchiyose Adept

 Post subject: Re: Senju, Hisashi
PostPosted: Mon Apr 15, 2019 4:27 am 
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Hey thanks for the review and site welcome! I took in to consideration your notes and edited the document points as well. Hope it is better.

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